On your marks, Get set, Go

"We have to turn our 4ths into 3rds, 3rds into 2nds,  and our 2nds into 1st. 10 Year old girls your up!

As I was walking up I was feeling tense my arms are shaking. I was worried that I was going to come last. Mixed emotions filled my head, but I knew with the school cheering me on I can win! So I  looked over to see who I was facing but most of the kids looked like wobbly jelly.

"ON YOUR MARKS" I was fixed on the finish line I wished that I was already there. 'GET SET" I could hardly hear my self think because of the crowd. "GO" I shot off like a rocket.

'Swoosh, Thump, Zip' I was off like a wild horse passing every one I see. Looking at the finish line wondering how many tokens I'll get. So I closed my eyes then when I opened them I was over the finish line.

Looking at Mr Spice he told me that I didn't come first Danielle did but luckily I came second so its not all bad. Then suddenly Mr Spice gave me two brilliant  tokens. I just can't wait to put them in he token box. Then suddenly we heard a "thump"the boys were racing. "GO" we shouted! They sounded like lightning and thunder. I think that was a great race.                                                                        by Ellie